no Honest is what I asked for, will take it on board, like I said 1st try.Its not to my personal taste as it seems too much and the placement of hardscape doesn't seem (to my eye) pleasing. The key question is do you like it, could you see ways to improve it? If not then plant it up.
I would play with alternative approaches, perhaps think about using the three largest pieces upright as 'mountains ' covered with epyphites. A good starting place would be to copy or riff on one of the scapes you like online or in the journal section.
Sorry, you asked for honest opinions!