Iwagumi Hardscape Feedback needed

[Gary Murphy]

Hey Everyone, Not quite ready to start a Journal just yet and am looking for opinions on some of the hardscapes I have come up with.

Here is the first one a 5 stone Iwagumi using some Okho Stone i picked up from my LFS.

 

[Mark Allen]

I'm not an expert in anyway, but I think the right rock is too flat.

 

[MrHidley]

I think it's too liner, as in all the rocks are in a straight line. I think it'd be better if you took the rock farthest to the left and moved it to the front of the group, almost touching the rock second on the left.